What we done to improve with the Audience Feedback:

The first comment we addressed was: "Yes, the teacher speaking after the woman in Enfield Town is too low", from this comment combined with "We need more people's opinions", we have decided to replace this lady with a person who we interviewed in the streets which links well with the previous interviewee, as they are both loud. This makes it run more smoothly instead of going from one extreme to another, which is what we had before with the very loud 'shouting' compared to the very quiet talking. Perhaps switching the roles and having the quite lady first could have a huge effect on how we hear her. However, we decided that it would be best that we replace her with someone we were confident our audience would be able to hear.

From the feedback concerning the subtitles, we have decided to enlarge the font so our audience can read the subtitles easier. However, we believe that the speed is good enough to read comfortably and that there is no need to slow these down.

Many of our audience said that our Interviews were too short. Therefore, we have included long interviews of a fitness expert. Instead of having long interviews from people who are camera shocked and have no idea what they are taling about, this is because we think this would make our documentary very dull and loose our target audience.

Out of 10, our documentary rated an average of 7.75 out of 10. With the new improvements we are hoping to improve this to 8.5 or 9.

The rest of the feedback given was very good and we are very pleased with our results.